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catch you.



i want to empty my fears
into the bowls of your eyes
and draw stars until night warms
our cold stale breath

maybe someday you'd understand
that there's a long way to the moon
that we are still stuck on dreams

i could catch you, and sprinkle
your smile with mine;

maybe then being stuck on a dream
wouldn't be so bad.

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  • delightful.


  • divebar
    January 5

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    all of it feels so detached and so personal. im not sure how you manage that. but its quite fascinating.