My darling,
I have penned so many letters to you in my mind for just over a year. How do I begin to tell you just how much you mean to me?.. I have always loved you and whether there be blizzards, sun or rain...it will continue...never fading. In the background your lady will always be, loving you just the same, a hungry never ending fire, an eternal flame will always burn inside of me...sweetheart cannot you see, I will love you for eternity?
Darling, you are the love of my life, my one and only, you have lifted the loneliness that used to own me. Setting me free from a life of loveless fear...baby my lover, how could I ever love another when the love I have for you will never die? You have transformed me this year, my life, made me feel out of this world, the love that we share feels so good it makes me want to cry in happiness, I never thought a love like this could possibly exist.
Baby, I know you will disagree, but you have a quality about you that comes from deep within, that has no words to explain, with your love and understanding, you have helped me to erase my pain...helped me to grow, allowing me to be truly me. Showed me it's ok to say what I am feeling and thinking, that I should never be afraid. Your faith in me has given me the courage to believe in me too. I felt like a young girl when I fell in love with you, you saw my potential, now for the first time I feel like a beautiful woman... you still continue to nurture the garden of my soul.
My heart gasps with desires beat, nothing will ever defeat what we have..we will always be you and I...and whenever we need to cry..we know that we now have a place to go...knowing we can truly let go without fear, where loving arms will comfort and hold, never letting go until our feelings are released and we are once again at peace.
I guess what I am trying to say is...I love you baby with my heart and soul, you are my man, my lover, my friend, when I am in need it is you I turn to, the one person on whom I can depend. Darling you complete me, make me feel whole. I miss you with every passing second that ticks away the day. My love for you is limitless, unconditional and with you will always stay.
We have both played a big role in each others lives, bringing out the best in each other, that no other will ever be able too. My darling, boo, my lover, everyday is new, and life is grand..and whatever is planned...I am so glad to have been able to share part of my life with you...Honey I adore and worship you. I will always be there for you, protect you, wish you nothing but the very best in everything you do. There is no escape from what we have..why would we ever what to lose something so honest, unique, pure and true? Even when it comes time to part, you and I will always be...living in each others hearts...no matter what, a part of me will be with you...and you will be with me too.
I know one day you will close the door, as circumstance and fate play their part, walking away with the key to my heart. When that time comes, baby, don't worry about me...you will have my blessing, be free to live your life.
In time I will find the strength within me, to be free from the grief that will be my companion. As I eventually remove the knife and that pain subsides, I will remember and cherish all the good times that we shared, how we cared and so deeply loved, and how blessed I was to have been touched by a man in such a profound way, with such a compassionate, non-judgmental...be it dark...deeply loving tender heart, whose love knew no bounds.
Loving you always
Chelle xxx
Author notes
Congratulation Greg on your first year on AP
It has been a pleasure getting to know you
and seeing you grow as a writer at great speed.
From your first posts to what you do know is
just amazing.
Wishing you all the best and continued success on here
and as you continue to study honing your craft, aim
high hon and grab your dreams with both hands
I know you can do it.
Love ~sweetness~ 
xxx
A contest entry
- Cry Me A River by Ephiphany.
1050 points, ended February 13, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Would You Love Me Still? by MichaelSavage.
700 points, ended February 20, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love, Please by Painted Nails.
950 points, ended November 17, 98 entries
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loved this
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Beautiful poem i just love this
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wow as a confession Bravo!!!
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Lovely!
I can identify. "you have lifted the loneliness that used to own me", "you have helped me to erase my pain...helped me to grow", "Darling you complete me, make me feel whole." Each paragraph is filled with love and meaning. Beautiful.
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It's for a very beautiful person, I appreciate you reading Howard.
~sugar~
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very heart felt poem...nice form...I really like this.
Thank you.
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A pleasure so glad you enjoyed...thank you for the bronze
~sugar~
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Great job
I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you and good luck.
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Hi sis, thanks hon, glad you enjoyed.
~sugarcookie~
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wow.....whoever this guy is, he surely must mean the world to you. i thought that this was sweet and very heartfelt. the words were very well flowed together, and i enjoyed it immensely. thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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He is truly one of lifes best and I have been blessed.
Thank you for your lovely comment, much appreciated.
~sugar~
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Wow!
Who iz dis guy? He must be someone special. You do know how to put someone on the spot. This is quite a read. Learning how to express yourself is what its all about. Finding the freedom to love and be vulnerable is the ultimate release in the best of relationships. I see, a woman who has survived and prospered through her hardships and grown into becoming someone special. Know that your friendship was all I had at one time on this site. I still value it as priceless and honest. This man should also. Good friends continue to give and give. Thanks Michelle, for a wonderful entry that displays the depth of your ability to love and be loved.
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It has been a pleasure getting to know you Greg and being able to call you friend, to see your writing improve in leaps and bounds, and watching you succeed, as you study honing your skills, simply brilliant. I wish you continued success, on here and with your studies.
Thank you for your wonderful comment, always valued and appreciated. Have I put you on the spot?? Always full of surprises me. LOL!
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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this was just so beautiful! I am at a loss for words! It made my heart smile, feeling the love that you put into words here.. Thank you very much for sharing! best of luck to you!
Angel
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*wipes tear* this is love!!!!
this is it!!
i love this piece, this is love, this is honest and true love and omg..
this is gorgeous!
thank you so much for sharing this with me!!!!!
best of luck in the contest
sky xxx
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Thank you for the opportunity and your lovely comment...it is honest and true love. I am glad you enjoyed it.
~sugar~
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OMG hon..wipes tears. This is so deeply touching to share such a deep ever lasting love such as this is deeply deeply moving. You have penned here a most beautiful love letter, the flow is wonderful, so tender.
All the best hon
Emma
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Thank you Em, for you lovely comment, what we have is just so beautiful, but on borrowed time. As always it is a pleasure to have you read, valued and appreciated.
~sugar~
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SO SWEET IT HURTS, INDEED!
IF this deeply emotional piece from your heart and soul doesn't get THE GOLD in this contest - I don't know what will. You really duck DEEP into your heart and soul to write such a beautiful love letter with such a fine flow and filled to the brim with tenderness, love, compassion, devotion, sensuality, sweetness, and emotion that is in every word and line. The lucky bloke for who this was written is a VERY LUCKY MAN, to say the least.
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Thank you hon, for your lovely comment. One day, there will be for a while an emptiness in me, I will hardly be able to bear..but it is worth the joy and deep love I have at the moment...it is so sweet is hurts.
It's always a pleasure to have you read and comment
Love ~sugar~
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Oh .. that is so wonderful and the love just pours from this.. it is a love I hope and pray for.. one I would even die for... I am glad ..so very glad for you my dear friend.
Joann
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Thank you for your lovely comment, I'm sure one day you will have this, this came out of the blue, we started as friends and it progressed from there. what I have is complicated, there will never be another love like this, it is so complete.
Chelle
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