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miss you.

 

 

threads seep through me,

broken and tangled

 

for a second-

 

surises and sunsets pass

like a terrified blur

 

and everything inside feels like

a shower, hot and sultry

 

on dried blood.

 

 

i miss you- everything

about your halfway smile, childish jokes

and a thousand other things.

 

i clutch blue skies in my hand

and lie another night with your laugh

ringing softly in my ears.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Hikari Lady
    December 29, 2008

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    Wow! "surises and sunsets pass
    like a terrified blur"
    Loved this line, it was heart breaking and had a wonderful imagery. I loved how sad this poem was, also short and to the point. Excellent!!

    Much love
    ~Noor