Cobble-stoned concrete.
Painted partition
disguise
leathered curves.
Alabaster fingertips
relinquish
fumes of somberness.
Anticipating speed
in char-coaled surrealism.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture above
Credit: picture credit: rosiehardy @ flickr
18 Words
In a list
A contest entry
- #37 PICTURE INSPIRED (: by Walk-Free.
650 points, ended December 30, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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ok, so i have another potential suggestion =] :
[Painted partition
disguise
leathered curves.
Alabaster fingertips
relinquish
fumes of somberness.
Anticipating speed
in char-coaled surrealism.]
so, i just nixed two gerunds
i really liked 'leathered curves'
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Merci
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great piece! I love the pic and your words under it. "anticipating speed in char-coaled surrealism" love char-coaled surrealism...awesome! congrats on the silver
~Catie
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What i've seemed to notice about your work is that you are very good at the contests which involve only using a limited amount of words, yet still you manage to write it so beautifully, and word it wonderfully. I love your work.
Laura
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This is another brilliant poem by you darl! The way you've put all the words together, and the meaning of them all, wow!
Congrats
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Excellent
Another fabulous write. Always so well done. Congratulations on the silver.
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congratulation!!
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Thanks
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whoah. the words in here were brilliant
"Anticipating speed
in char-coaled surrealism."
amazing. you wowed me once again
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when i entered the contest it was so hard for me to express so much in just 18 words.love the way you play with words.very interesting.great write!!
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I like what you have done with the picture
Cant choose a favourite part i liked ALL of it
Best of luck to you
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This has a really powerful ending. Your poem fits perfect with the picture. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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aw this such a powerful take on the promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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I love the way You have used such creative imagery in this piece... ...Alabaster fingertips relinquishing fumes of somberness... such a Great pen... You awe me...
Love much..
Becca
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"char-coaled surrealism" I love how you manage to blur the lines between reality and fantasy. The juxtaposition of this piece is quite nice along with the presentation. Best of luck to you.
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