Words
They beckon me
and once again,
I am encapsulated,
by your voice,
and it calls me
in a whisper
bringing me from dark,
and opening me to the light.
Author notes
Eh....okay I guess...
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
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i truly understand this!
I have been called from the dark many times
well done Poet!
Blessings
Rend
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Why thank you.
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A wee bit of Yeats you have deep in your soul lass.
Excellent!
How the heart can bring you to darkness or light...
Just beautiful.....
it makes your sweet comment on my work valued ten fold.
God Bless you little gypsy,
Lowell Poe.
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I liked this a lot, I looked at this one because I had recently did a poem about whispers as well. Yours went in a complete different direction that's what I love about poetry. Great write.
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very nice vocabulary.
they work very nice in your poem,
great write.
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Thank you for your comment
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very nice i love the emotion in this piece keep up the great work.
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Hauntingly beautiful poem. I love it...well done!
Mariana
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