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you don't wear my chains

 

So quick to deliver lip service

and pass advice I never asked for.

You act like you understand all of this.

This is insulting, nothing short of

ignorant and I refuse to give you my time.

 

How can you know my struggles?

When did I share with you my mind?

Is there ever a day when my tears

cry on your shoulder?

No, I think not.

 

These chains are my burdens

that I breathe. You are not my air.

Do not say "It's okay" when you

can't fathom heartache and you

don't appreciate all the little things.

 

I am bound to struggles that would

bring you to your knees.

Don't tell me what I need when you

are craving for a purpose.

You are lost and no, I do not have answers.

 

My shackles are none of your concern

and no, I will not sit down and chat.

You don't wear the chains I wear,

so you can't sympathize with that.

 

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Yes, this title is one of the titles in one of my contest. However, it's such an awesome title, I couldn't help but write from it.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    Oh god, don't get me started on people whom are like this. Always passing advice they don't even know anything about. People are quick to jump in with opinions without even knowing what they are talking about. Stupid really, but I suppose human nature.


  • Sheli silver member
    January 1

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    i wish i'd thought of these stirring words, this needs said to someone in my life, lol, you have done an awesome job!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 31, 2008

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    What a wonderful write with great flow
    to it. Great take on the prompt and good luck!




    Jeremy0826


  • Nymphetemine
    December 29, 2008

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    Wow a very powerful write. You have a wonderful talent. Very raw I thought. Keep up the good work.
    Yorkshire Bard. Blessings,


  • Haley-baby1
    December 29, 2008
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    this carries strong emotion.
    and it flows seamlessly

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