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The Sweetest Hell

I can feel my heart breaking,
For real this time.
I can feel it breaking
And I never knew this much pain.
I thought I had been through the worst pain there was.
But it can always be worse.
And it's killing me slowly...
Never completely.
It won't kill me for good.
I won't die.
I won't be so lucky.
The pain won't go away,
And it won't end,
And my life won't end,
And I won't feel numb...
This is too real.
I can feel my hearting breaking.
For real this time...
But I don't really mind...
Because this is the sweetest hell.

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  • Izache777
    April 11
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    AWESOME

    I really love this write. I can relate so well to these words.


  • Zane Rose
    January 8

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    I knew this felling not to long ago. It was horrid. Great write! I loved reading it, but I would like to point out that in the 5th line you put "paint" and not "pain".
    Great job!
    ~AEO~


    • Sticks-And-Stones
      January 8
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      Omg, I did! XD That's a pretty funny typo. Takes away from the seriousness of it. Oh well.