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unashamed

no concealment,
extended open -

labor’s calluses
witness heart’s
devotion






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Prompt: bare hands, 9 words

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  • Mallig gold member
    January 23
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    I can't believe so much emotion and meaning could be conveyed in 9 words. Bravo!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 30, 2008
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    truly profound... x


  • In Too Deep1
    December 29, 2008
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    Such a unique and bold take on the prompt. The most difficult thing for us as humans to do, is the simple act of opening our hands because there is so much distrust.. warranted, and unwarranted. The true test of love is indeed when one opens his/her hands to another. A wonderful and creative take on the prompt. Best wishes in the comp