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Taking Notes from the Mirror

Puffy, tired eyes
smeared red and grey from tears and eyeliner
Lips red, as well
but only due to blood from nervous biting

I'm a Wreck

The state oozing from internal organs
through my skin
as impossible to hide
as it is amputate from me

I can't help hating them
        (everyone)
for being happy
when I can't even come close

And my insect-green nail lacquer

is chipped

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  • Judith Chandler
    August 30, 2009
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    So cheerful! I like this and have felt like this myself on occasion. Made me laugh.


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    December 30, 2008
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    I love this! so discriptive and dark so much emotion used here! I love it!