frightened
weary
u.n.c.o.m.p.r.e.h.e.n.s.i.b.l.e
wickedness
..d e v o u r s..
promises
d/e/s/t/r/o/y/e/d
masks
revealed
no justice
hate consumes me
I go on -
cursed for eternity.
Author notes
Prompt - Pic above 20 words
Pic Credit -
http://bucz.deviantart.com/art/Conscience-41966098
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 Quickie by AngelKat42.
970 points, ended December 29, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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aw wow such a brilliant take on the promt you have painted perfection with your words congratulations on your shiny
maralisa
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Emotions thrown in, but all well balanced out...Good dark write..Congrats on the bronze!
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The intensity and richness of this piece is awesome, Kari. You've done a wonderful job with the prompt and I wish you best of luck in the contest
Love and
Happy New Year
Granna
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this is an amazing poem that you've written.. I love it very much.. the presentation of this piece is strong & powerful.
excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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I enjoyed your various bits of thought. They all seem to meld together into one cohesive theme. The presentation of this is very interesting. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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I love it. I love the use of the html here, and the way that each line emphasises the pain
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Wow. Kari! I loved this. This was so different. Great word choice. Good luck to you in the contest.
Much love
Ylova
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Intersting take on the prompt. best of luck
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Wow! So I looked at this before, I had to come back was tryong to figuree out what to say. Your words amazed me. Perfect for the prompt. Good luck in the contest. ~~Iridessa~~
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Wow. Very well done. Very deep. The use of dirty pretty was, for me, entirely unexpected, and works very well. Great job.
Mike
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All the best!
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