my heart calls out to your heart
my spirit calls out to your spirit
my being calls out to your being
these walls imprison me,
these walls imprison my thoughts,
these walls are my limitations
how deep is the ocean?
how deep is the sky?
how may man know
the things that are beyond his experience?
how deep is the heart?
walls are built to keep people out,
and to keep people in.
walls are our limitations
but still, i call out to you
i come to you to worship,
and to serve
11/25/08
A contest entry
- big bang prewrites only contest by serenity silvermoon.
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this is really good
it gets me thinking, u know? good job
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bravo
my heart calls out to your heart
my spirit calls out to your spirit
my being calls out to your being
these walls imprison me,
these walls imprison my thoughts,
these walls are my limitations
i love this..........
beautiful.........
limitations are what we make them
and each of us has a different wall to conquer
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I really like that second stanza
How deep is the ocean
How deep is the sky
Reminded me of something Bob Dylan wrote.
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I really liked this poem. It made me think a lot while reading it. I feel I can relate, at some parts. Good write.
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"Walls are built to keep people out and keep people in". That is so true. Walls stop us from doing and fulfilling our dreams.
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very beautiful poem you have here great job many of us feel this way and your right the wall in are mind are our limitations thanks for sharing and i hope to read more of your poems keep that pen flowing
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