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Indulge


One glance
against all odds
predetermined my fate
beyond a reason of a doubt
to you...



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7 letter prompt=Indulge

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  • The Fun House silver member
    January 3

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    Oh, I do like where your mind has ventured with this prompt. It has an allure to it and a sense of danger. Well done.