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liar

i did not fall from heaven
i lept from the arms of grace
this misleading smile is upon a lieing face
i lie about how i feel inside,
i lie about my roaring ocean,
my rushing tide.
to look you in the eyes and say all is happy and true,
my be something i may never go through..

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  • embertathiana
    December 28, 2008

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    It may be random but it makes perfect sense. I really like this one. I think free-writing is beautiful. Keep up the great work.

    • skye-leigh
      December 28, 2008
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      thank you

      thank you so much thats so nice to know someone out there likes what i write i find your work quite amazing thank you