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pink blanket

do you see the girl with the pink blanket ?
was that her boyfriend?
why did  she walk so sad back to her door?

all the looks and misunderstanding
reel to the though if you were the
one looking in.

He might look like he was wrong
for leaving me feel so cold inside
he might look so loving by the way
he held me tight..

oh you will never know..
oh you will never know..
what really happend
will you.

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  • shiratikva
    December 31, 2008

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    This pure girl really feels broken hearted.
    And yes, of course he was wrong.
    It's sad poem, but the very ending is really promising happy ending.