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Born Again

My life before was filled with so much abuse and hate. The people who were supposed to protect me hurt me more each day. I started to self destruct smoking drinking tattooing myself(self mutilation was involved too) getting ready to drop out of school.... I cant take this crap anymore... all it took was one phone call to change my whole life .. my big sis came and took me home with her. I graduated high school, quit drinking and smoking, learned how to dress nicely and speak properly, also got into college. I am no longer the girl who would do what ever  I needed to to make myself feel better for the moment. I took the chance to change my life for the good

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  • Cant force beloved
    December 28, 2008

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    I hope that really you have found this better way that you speak of. I hope this write let out some pain that may have been hiding too.

    Good day