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xX Broken xX

When I woke up this morning,
I thought things had changed...
But the pain of the dagger you left in my heart still persisted
The burning sensation unbearable.
And to think you were once all that I wanted...

Funny how things work out...
You were the best thing I had a long time ago
Then things change ....people change.
You hurt me more then I can count
Why was I so loyal to you?
Why did I let you do these things to me?

This is the last time that "I’m sorry" will comfort me
No more will I deny the lies that you continue to feed me
Little did I know?

Every time I finally get the strength I need to get over you
To get you rid of you in my life...
You start these games all over again
Like a twisted seduction you have
You keep my heart dangling...
Well no more will you be pulling my strings

You will always be more then a memory
But there is one thing that is for sure
You won’t be my future...

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  • Bruised.Roses
    December 29, 2008

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    oh wow babe this was amazing loved it !!!!! great job i'm so glad you started writting again i always loved your poetry xoxoxox keep writting
    xTashax


  • insideinsanity
    December 28, 2008

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    Bitter.

    I hope you learn to forgive again, despite the pain.

    Writing-wise, you describe the actual emotion vividly, and the absolute torture the entire ordeal is...I don't envy you that.