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Decide

There is a look,
In his eyes,
Of confusion,
Of despise,
Please, just decide.
Stuck between a pulling bind,
Why put me through this state of mind?
Please, just decide.
It kills you to go through it,
For the sake of his pride,
Never again chose a guy,
Who has to decide.

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  • Nikonic Freak silver member
    November 20
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    "never choose a guy
    who has to decide"
    AMEN.
    If he doesn't know who he wants, you don't want him. Simple as that. No one should date a guy who isn't 100% positive of his feelings.


  • jbbrandi
    January 8
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    Ooooh...powerful. It SAYS something. I love it.


  • Let-Me-Go
    December 28, 2008
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    Wowy wow wow

    i like this its deep!!!!