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It Must Heal All Wounds

Time - it must heal all wounds,
    of all kinds,
  but time passed by too quickly,
        how could it heal mine?

I demand for a cure,
    something that would make me forget,
everything that left me in tears,
    everything that made me broken.

Your face, it was etched so deep on my heart,
  how my mind can decipher your traces,
how it continue to remain with no resistance,
  my heart, it's breaking, I could see your many faces.

I demand for a cure,
  that only time could give,
but as it passes by so quickly,
  everything that I have left are just tears.

I ought to be stronger,
  even hypnotized myself to be inhuman,
but with just the sweet poison of your voice,
  everything that I have worked for, would soon be gone.

I don't have any options but to cry,
  but my pride won't let it be,
for a guy, so handsome, yes, such a delight,
  but could break my heart drastically.

I intend to sing along with the love songs on the radio,
  but my voice just can't be heard,
I am screaming ever so loudly
  but without you, how could I be urged?

I am with a pen and a paper once again,
  pouring out my sorrows,
for someone who just can't cry out so easily,
maybe to be a poet is the only hope.

Author notes

Why do you have to appear again, when my life is just alright...
I don't need you.
isn't that the same reason why you shove me away?

Option 1: Dark Valentine
C: Bring out the Sadness

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  • z etoile
    February 24
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    Wow great job thank you for sharing!


  • tears.of.silence
    February 7

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    Beautiful

    I really like this poem. It's very well written and flows beautifully.. I really like this part the best because it holds true to me because it's how I feel about the man i dearly love....
    " ought to be stronger,
    even hypnotized myself to be inhuman,
    but with just the sweet poison of your voice,
    everything that I have worked for, would soon be gone"

    Great work, thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck.

  • Your emotion in this come off as very genuine and honest. Very good

    And it does hurt and it does suck when it seems like everything is going great in life and someone from our past decides to show up

  • It is very painful at times when old wounds are ripped open by a returning affliction. I know what you talk about from first hand experience with my last girl friend.

    Great job.

    Mike