First glance captivates
without a thought I inhale
your sweet aroma
a rush so paralyzing
words escape my lips
every heartbeat measured
as a blush evolves
caught in your gaze
a fascinating drug of choice
fate interlocks
fragile palpitations
to nature’s deadliest instinct…
Author notes
12 lines
A contest entry
- Hues of Red in 12 Lines or Less (there's a catch) by The Fun House.
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well written poem. I really liked the way it flowed awesome job
keep up the great job
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Wow. I absolutely loved this. I can't think of anything else to say except for wow. Excellent write!
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Ah, the most deadly are always the most alluring are they not? LOL A excellent job on this one, especially for few lines. You've really brought the prompt to life.
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Hmm. Poisonous evil incorporating into the soul. Hmm, again. Delightful piece, in it's darkness.
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red and sensual...this reminds me of the painting of O'Keeffe's red poppy
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