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Potlucks and deafened ears

Potlucks 'til midnight
My ears go deaf once a year
They cheer way too loud.

Author notes

New Year = Parties
Parties = Loud relatives
Loud relatives = @#$%! MY EARS!

New years = @#$%! MY EARS!
(transitive property.. >___> frikkin geo.)

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 29, 2008

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    lol

    thats what NY eve is all about NOISE!
    NICE EXPRESSIVE poem here thank you for this entry, good luck
    Voe


  • myusikah
    December 29, 2008
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    You can't do short poem. No. No.