something about the way
you spoke
made my ideas slip away
it wasn't as if
i was going to say
'no'
anyway
but that didn't
even come into my mind
whatever you said
repeat it
and i'll reply just the
same
A contest entry
- love by Melissa Gayle.
1000 points, ended December 29, 2008, 22 entries
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Well done, good luck
my question was...
oh heck i forgot, the look you gave, stole my thoughts.
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Lol.
Y'know, it happens sometimes...
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yes it does.
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Succinct but not overly encompassing. Though I really appreciate that you didn't even use the word love!
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Well...love would be cliche, and I think the ere of nonspoken probably is better
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