green stitches hold crimson tatters,
black laces wrapped around bleeding shards
somebody wasn't thinking;
honey, what happened to you?
just another failed coyote ugly,
but you seemed to get so caught up in the game...
Author notes
Word choice: Illicit [def] not permitted
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (I) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 3, 31 entries
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very cool
cayoye ugly oh i love it
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Well thanks!
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This is interesting and unique. I like the metaphors and how it slaps images in my mind long though dormant. Subtle yet brillant.
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Thank you, very much! [beams]
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HA,Ha, ha!
Cute one.
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Hehe, I tried. I wasn't sure if it was supposed to be sinister sweet, or just a laugh!
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