Burn it down,burn it down
Burn this pretty city to the ground
We'll soak ourselves in the White Fire and whipping flames,
Say our Mommies and Daddies are to blame
watch it burn,watch it burn
We'll swim in the ashes of Hatred and Frustration.
Tell ourselves "This is my Heart's Liberation"
watch it burn,watch it burn
This is the day we've all been waiting for...
When Great Buildings fall
and Mighty Kings crawl
This burning city,oh so pretty will burn so bright
Even the Stars in Heaven will be jealous of it's Glorious Light.
Author notes
idk where this one came from.....but i just the strongest urge to write and this iswhat came out
Please tell me what you think...
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Wow, this is great. I love the descriptions in this piece. It really describes our generation and the hatred that is seeping from out pores. Great job.
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wow. i was blown away.
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wow this is pretty strong.
i love this part, "say our mommies and daddies are to blame."
i dont know why, i guess from my own life i really do think parents shape their kids actions.
well anyways nice write :]] -
forgot these
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well done
I liked this a lot! You did a great job, the repitions was awesome! I also love how in your author's comments it says you had the urge to right and this came out! Inspirational Writing is the best way to write well done -
...woah...
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awesomerific!!!!!
casey, you have really out done yourself this time i love every single line.
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wow this pretty amazing... i really like the rhyming, and i can see it all happening as i read it too
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That's fucking mad! I love it. I could picture it as I was reading it too. Its fucking amazing. Keep writing!
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This is fucking awesome. I love it and i can almost feel the heat coming off of it! Is my papa Casey angry about something?
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I quite like it. The Rhyming was done really well and I liked how you wrote "watch it burn, watch it burn" I thought that was pretty awesome. really well done
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