as winter's breath bit
a frozen cobweb shivered
iced to perfection
A contest entry
- haiku or short forms over age 15 please by HopelessScribbles.
525 points, ended January 30, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Three Lines Of Wonder by poets whisper.
700 points, ended November 4, 104 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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That was brilliant. I love the image this leaves in the mind. I also love the layout too. Wonderful piece.
Well done Sugar.
Wayne Leon
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Such a delicate horro story...just an amazing spidery spin on life and love...
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wonderful piece of haiku
thank you for this nature picture in her coldest time of the year, good luck ..
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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ICED TO PERFECTION, INDEED!
A fine haiku, Sugar! Haiku's are supposed to be about nature and so with this wonderful piece - and the perfect background for it - you have done your job VERY WELL. GOOD LUCK in this contest - and THANKS for sharing as always.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Thank you hon for your fab comment, always a pleasure sweetie. I like to have a go at these every now and again.
Love you Chelle xxx
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sweetly frozen in perfection.. a beautiful write.. I have never been able to get the hang of haiku's, have no idea why but you did such a wonderful job! best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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Thank you Angel, I appreciate you commenting
This is my 3rd attempt, I usually can't count lol
~sugar~
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makes me want to wrap up warm reading this poetic picture, graet write, good luck in the contest x
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Thank you YK for your lovely comment, I appreciate you reading.
~sugar~
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A wonderful haiku. I can see the scene unfold as the cold wind swirls around making it move and as you say, covered in frost iced to perfection. I know you have not done may of these, good luck with this
All the best
Emma
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I keep trying, I just hope it is right lol. Glad you enjoyed it hon, as always I appreciate you reading.
~sugar~
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