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Morning Begins Anew

starry black night sky
covering lonely wolf sleeping
survival of life

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  • Malabu
    January 29

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    night and black are redundant
    try not to use 'ing' in your ku's it will help you master singular moments to thoughts at hand
    thank you for this entry


  • DogFish silver member
    January 17

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    starry black night sky
    covering lonely wolf sleeping
    survival of life

    "the darkest hour's before dawn"
    but awaken and gloom is gone