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The sun shines. The sky is clear. The house is empty. The tv is on.
He is so stupid. I knew he was going to be this way, and foolishly tried I did.
The sky isnt clear anymore, there is one cloud hiding the sun.
Where is mom, didnt she get off work? Dad is at grandma's.
She always uses excuses to meet up with him, right under dad's nose.
Hate fills me as I sit here and keep obessing over what he said. Afterall, he didnt even mean it.
Watching tv is worthless, nothing holds my attention long enough to stop these thoughts.
Wonder where mom is and why she isnt home yet. She use to never be late, that is until she met Derek at work.
Everyone said it was a waste of time. Its my fault that he proved me right.
I really dont want to go to school tomorrow, the news says its going to rain.
Outside my window, the window he always came through to see me in my room, I only see one cloud covering the sun.
Is it possible for the weather man to be wrong. He isnt God. No one is perfect.
They make mistakes. How long could one person make a mistake?
I am looking outside and I can see clouds in the distance.
Impending storm looks like it cant be fought off any longer. Time will tell how severe the damage will be.

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Author: belovedlife

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  • insideinsanity
    December 28, 2008

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    Wow.

    Powerful, and it fits the title *really* well.

    I wasn't expecting that, when I stopped in.

  • cindyloo
    December 28, 2008

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    This is a very unique write. I feel much pain and misery in this. I thought it was brilliant how the weather changed with your thoughts and the last line was powerful. I am so very sorry you are going through this pain. I hope you keep on writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.