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Cry for Muse

Show me
Elusively bewitching Muse
A word,a picture,a dream?
Rouse me from the duldrums
Of my lagging empty mind
Lying here untold hours in darkness
Fumbling for the light and colors
To turn them into words

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  • penman gold member
    January 3
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A great creation. Thank you for sharing.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    January 1

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    Beautiful Melancholy...

  • A-muse-in-writer
    December 30, 2008

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    Love this

    Ah the constant struggle to place into words those things that lay locked in our hearts and minds. Usually muse makes it her misssion to put the words into my head when just about asleep *eye rolls and grins* I really relate to this one.


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    December 28, 2008

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    Wonderfully written i know exactally how it feels to have absoultly no insperation and your muse has betraid you i think you have captured thease emotions very well in this poem.especially at a time when you are feeling uninspired to write. xxx