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When im gone

When im gone
He will miss me.

When im not around
He will hate himself
For hurting me
For hitting me
For kicking me

He takes me for granted
He gets mad for no reason
He yells and screams
He tells me he hopes...
I die.

when im gone
I will be happy.

when i can find a way out
I will be happy

when he's missing me
I will be happy

when hes kicking himself
for hurting me
I will be happy.

I love him.
He hurts me.

When im gone
it will hurt him.



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  • skye101
    December 28, 2008

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    very good. i liked the flow a lot. the end was really good. it connected the entire poem so it felt like it was a good closer. thanks for entering and good luck.