she walked with me talked with me grew up with me
she met a boy who she feel in love with
although it was her fifth
she was young, and beautiful, and he was her knight
and shining armor
they went some place together, to spend the night
but they go into a horrible fight
she awoke, and he took her to a river
he ran, and didnt take her with him
he shouted he loved her, and he jumped to his death
she came home, happy and full of love,
but because of another man
she got pregnant, and she was scared
having a kid was all she feared
she called me to nights before, saying her goodbyes
i asked her what was wrong, she said it was all the guys
her ryan had died
she didnt want to live, so she hung up the phone, and i ran to her
i came in, and saw her dead, i walked over tears spilling over
i touched her face, my heart began to race
she killed herself becuse of a man, did she not think through her plan?
what am i to do now? i went through life, sad and heart broken
for she took half of my heart with her. she was my best friend
i guess it just had to end
A contest entry
- Devastatingly Depressing. by a.changed-soul..
1130 points, ended January 5, 23 entries
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Wow I am sorry you have to go through this. You are a good friend and it wasnt your fault. You are very hurt about what she did, but you can help other people by telling your story about how much it hurts the loved ones of the victims of suicides. You will find strength to accept what has happened, it will take time. Thank you for your story, good luck with everything.
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thanks
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I'm terribly sorry for your loss, it's not a good to do what your friend did..
Please, use spell check.
This was wonderfully written.
Thank-You for entering,
best of luck in the contest.
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o thank u a bunch
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