you've tore away my wings,
you've stolen my heart,
you've sealed away my kiss.
you took away my vanity,
you replaced it with your fire.
you have stolen me from grace,
you pulled the strings and sent me crashing.
now I'm in your ring of hell,
I am just your entertainment for the night,
the ring leader.
a thousand sins all preformed by you,
when will they consume you?
when will the storms arise to save me?
you have stolen me from grace,
you have tinted my angel wings.
you stitched my mouth shut,
wrapped ropes around my limbs,
and now i'll never return to grace...
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okay so this is newer. [: Ummm not much to say about it, the lines: "wrapped ropes around my limbs" came to me from the song the ransom by escape the fate, if you must now the lyrics in the were: "quick we have the ransom, tell me now if you can swim with ropes wrapped around your limbs" just saying :] Enjoy and comment. xx
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beautifully written! so powerfull, so emotional I love it
"you have tinted my angel wings.
you stitched my mouth shut,
wrapped ropes around my limbs,
and now i'll never return to grace..."
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hmmmmmm..........
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Hmm. So, I think the first line needs to be 'torn' not 'tore'. I've been musing this aloud (I like to read aloud, don't make fun, lol) and I rather think it makes it flow better.
But this almost makes me think of a relationship gone horribly wrong...or realising that one of your closest friends is not all you believed them to be.
I really really adore it... Very nice.
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ohh i think you're right it would sound better as torn, thankies. [:
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Hehe, no problem
I figure I'd offer the help out. ^^
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Dark and beautiful!! And both of those ocmbined make for a very perfect poem!! *bows to you* Very nice word usage here!!
-Thousand Petals
Happy New Year!!
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thank yooou.
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