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The Great Plan

My Great Plan
Failed
Brought to this place again
Two instead of one
To much for me
coming to the great conception
My faith is lost in the clouds of my mind
Bites and Peices come to me
Trying to find the way out
A fog concluded in rhyme

i cried for the loss of my soul
i cried for the lose of my emotions
i cry everynight for a life for him
Knowing my hear does not belong here
Staying only for a love that failed

i write my life away
waiting ofr my end...

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  • Witchengine
    June 7
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    Never look away, you must always face the challenge no matter personal fatigue

  • saint dundee
    February 16
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    u r good

    i feel somewhat like this