the sun is a great warrior,
father had told me this in many stories.
it is without an answer that
i am in some part,
in all of these stories.
i cry for you beautiful falling sky,
the sun and great warrior
meet as one.
behind Nvda, (Lune)
Mother to us all.
Author notes
Cherokee
A contest entry
- THROUGH THE EYES OF A CHILD by Whispering Wind.
700 points, ended December 30, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think
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Beautiful picture you have used and lovely words to go well with it. Congrats on the silver.
Sheila
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Thank you Little Moon "
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WoW! now this is so beautiful and touches the heart softly...as though a prayer is slipped from the lips and floats quietly upon whispered hopes...niaish so much for entering
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danke thank you so much Twilight. thank you for the wonderful contest. this has been one of my favorites. I rarely enter contests.
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Beautiful
You have left me speachless once again... it is beautiful.
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