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Ice-cold (an acrostic)

Ice-cold glares recieved from everywhere,

A tradgetie brought with it,
Many tears

Ice-cold words that slip through lips,
Can you have no sympathy?
Emo girl, is what they say I am.

Can there be no forgiveness?
Or is that to much to ask?
Labels hurt,
Don't you see?

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Ok this is for a contest and it is an acrostic poem so read what it says!

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  • The Fun House silver member
    January 3

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    Label do hurt indeed. A small thing here, tradgetie should be tragedy. This seems very personal and I really like that, it gives insight. Well done.

  • XmmusicXloverrX
    December 28, 2008
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    I love this poem, it's so true!
    ~nat

  • The Fun House silver member
    December 28, 2008
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    What is your chosen prompt? You need a seven lettered word starting with "I" (one word). Please let me know. Thanks.