Broken dreams
Broken smiles
Hidden bruises
Hidden tears
This is my song
This is my story
Cruel world
Surrounded by hate
Where love only skims the surface
Barely touching, barely feeling.
A house filled with broken glasses
Each step cuts deep
And pain flows free
But happiness is hidden deep
Fighting to come to the surface…
When hope is gone, time flies quickly
When joy is felt, anger swoops in and takes it away.
Broken dreams
Broken smiles
I have survived once
But will I survive again?
Author notes
Option D
number 5 and 9
A contest entry
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1680 points, ended December 31, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Different take than I expected but well written. Good luck!
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damnnn dis is deep
did something happpend
cuz its getting me depressed
it was THAT gud
i think u should enter this
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thanks hun
im still thinking about it
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