Inhale
Exhale.
Inhale
Exhale.
That is all there can be.
That is all I can think about.
all I can deal with.
Inhale
Exhale.
Choke.
But I can't,
I can't not think,
of you.
Your hair fluttering
about your face,
and your knees crumbling
to fall
in the red pool beneath you.
Inhale
Exhale.
Scream.
A contest entry
- Devastatingly Depressing. by a.changed-soul..
1130 points, ended January 5, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
do you know what i'm talking about?
Comments
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wow
That was stunning, and amazingly deep. So blunt, yet it is subtle in a way. Great job.
Inhale
Exhale.
Scream.
I liked the effect of that!
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This was great..wonderful imagery..
Do I know what your talking about..
I pictured someone falling into a pool of their own blood, while you watched and tried to focus on breathing...choking then breathing..then screaming.
This was perfect.
Thank-You for entering,
best of luck in the contest.
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