To celebrate this
passing year I want to be
so drunk i forget
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what better way to spend the transition between calendar years than to be puking in the opposite sexes bathroom at a bowling alley? i know. i cant think of one either.
A contest entry
- New Year, Haiku or short forms by misticmoonlite.
495 points, ended December 30, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hibernation, anyone?
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NICE RESOLUTION
hope all your wishes come true, but please don't get sick...lol
good luck in this contest
voe
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Hmm. That seems a little bit darker than I'd expect for New Years. But undeniably, I like where you choose to set this, emotionally. Just dark enough to be satisfying, to my current state of mind.
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