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A Real Kind of Love






There are hours we do not talk.
I sit in my room pecking poems
like a lunatic and you read novels
and listen half hearted to the TV.

There is music in such silence
the song of the long marriage.
It is never sung the way we think
full of beautiful words and wet kisses.

It is the song of acceptance.
The song of forgiveness
after pulling out your hair.

It is a song or realization
that there is no sunset.
You are not Jennifer Aniston
and I'm too short for Clint
and too dam old to be Brad Pitt.

But in this whole wide world
we are puzzle pieces
that have learned to fit.

Together we make a picture

on the cover of a box

marked half off.

I walk into the living room
and our eyes meet.
We each send an air kiss
and go on about our day
in the kind of love
that is simply enough
and more than I can ask for.

 

 

 

 

 












 

Author notes

I know I should have picked Angelina Jolli or whatever her name is, but Jennifer Aniston is better looking in my humble opinion lol

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  • BehindTheShadow
    December 28, 2008
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    Lucky in love, nice to read some hit the jackpot! Great job.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    Critically I don't care for the repetition of "It is the/a song".

    I really like the reality of it, a long and happy marriage is a beautiful thing.