solemnly resolved
my slovenly ways i'll change
for at least one day
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resolutions are made to be broken lol as i have so many times nice one indeed thank you for this entry, good luck ,...voe
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Hehe, that happens so often - a resolution lasts for a few days, maybe a month. But I like this piece, and how it catches that reality. Very blunt, but good.
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