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Snow Blind Winter Of The Soul

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a slow and plodding walk
to winter’s high brow

through thigh high snow
to find warmer shelter
with which to view
this white-faced world

finding none

she sunk beneath brittle branch
to wish and wait
for time
when she would leave no tracks
that would disappear
as easily
as she could





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Prompt: Anything about winter

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  • Rhythm Child
    December 31, 2008

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    thankyou for entering. I hope you enjoy the contest and have fun.

    take care
    message me for anything

    Rhythm Child


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    this piece is wonderful... It was a brilliant write on the prompt, and makes so much sense....i loved the last stanza, it stood solid in the poem and brought it home excellently!

    beccaLaughing