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Champagne

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kissing strangers --
a wild cork brings in
the new year
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Happy New Year to you all!!!!!!!

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 5

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    excellent~

    Beautiful glittering ku
    A cork and lots of confetti as well sweetie
    Congrats on the silver............
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • carole21
    December 30, 2008
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    nicely done . . good luck in the contest !!


  • Naughtygrlred
    December 29, 2008
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    Happy new year to you too.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    Great write! happy new years to you too!

    • haikumonk gold member
      December 28, 2008
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      Yay.... thanks Catie... I appreciate your coming by very much. Take care and have a safe and sound...... and awesome New Year.

      Don


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    this is funny

    and yet Haiku form perfect, thank you for this entry, good luck in my contest...VOE

    • haikumonk gold member
      December 28, 2008
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      Thank you so much. Just had to have some fun with this one.... couldn't resist! The thought of a cork flying around doing the kissing of "strangers"... ahaha... caught my muse! .... have a blessed New Years....

      Don


  • catz Moderators member
    December 28, 2008

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    Your haiku makes me think that maybe I should get wild this New Years eve and pop a cork or two, wild or not No champagne for me though... but I can pretend with a bottle of sparkling cider... oh wait... damned screw on bottle caps !!

    A nice haiku, as always, Don. Happy New Year to you, too


    Dee


  • Kitesen
    December 28, 2008

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    Dangling not knowing how or where it will land. All happy wishes are welcome.
    So Happy new year to you too.


    • haikumonk gold member
      December 28, 2008
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      Thanks so much for coming by... much appreciated.

  • piccola silver member
    December 28, 2008

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    streaming confetti
    a popping champagne bottle
    Duck a flying cork

    your haiku is always spectacular. Have the happiest of new years!


    • haikumonk gold member
      December 28, 2008
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      Hey Piccola.... Happy New Year....!!! Be sure to duck!!! LOL


  • insideinsanity
    December 28, 2008
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    Hehe, always a stray cork at a party! Nice image.


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    December 28, 2008

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    Wonderful play on words! Striking and strong imagery. Very nicely laid out. Happy New Year!!

    Char


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    December 28, 2008

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    LOL...

    Good one! Sure beats my entry. This is one of the reason it's good to be a tee totaler! Watch out for those flying corks...they sure can be wild... Enjoyed this...

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