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Time Of Year

winter's solemn smile
nests exposed on bare branches
money like leaves, scarce

 

 

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    oh this

    natures haiku is so pure and true to form thank you for this entry, good luck
    voe


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    this is nice

    nature says alot in form and style, thank you for this entry and good luck in my contest
    Valleyof echoes


  • insideinsanity
    December 28, 2008

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    You cover a lot, even in those few words. I like how, using the haiku form, you kept it to the natural, as haiku is supposed to. Nice job.