Memories
mingle
with tears.
Dreams of
you turn to
nightmare.
Quiet quill,
nevermore
shall write.
Our loss,
is Heaven's
gain...
Author notes
7. a dream, a whisper
Don't know what to say...tears are getting in the way of my muse...Please extend my sincerest condolences....and love!
Nice thing to do!
A contest entry
- ...Love-Life-Live... by Desire.
1221 points, ended December 28, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful Well composed like most of yourlvely writes are
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This is such a beautiful write- the imagery is stark and the emotions heartfelt.
I love your form.
Lovely write!
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: With love...
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times~ I am Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
You took the title prompt and ran with it~ Bravo!!
When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~ For some reason- while reading I kept hearing reference to movie Dragonslayer- the part where the maiden (virgin) sacrificed herself and went into the cave anyways- also seeing the young apprentice- Gosh it has been ages since I have seen that movie Hopefully that makes some sense Line: Quiet quill ~tugged at Heartstrings for some reason~Powerful words and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Memories mingle with tears
Beautiful Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings and Happy Holidays too
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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Lovely and Very touching....
best wishes in your contest.
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