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No More.


No drinking, no drugs
no more swearing, smoking, lies.
Drops halo on floor.

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New Year, Haiku or short forms

A contest entry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    NICE RESOLUTION

    In haiku form, so lets salute to them and not
    garauntee it will be followed through lol thank you for this entry, good luck
    Voe


  • insideinsanity
    December 28, 2008

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    Hmm.

    This requires some thought. But certainly, it's very powerfully written. It almost sounds like a New Years' resolution.


  • poetrandy
    December 28, 2008
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    Nice Senryu!

    Interesting take on the New Year's possible resolutions! Good luck in the contest!


  • KayJay
    December 28, 2008
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    My resolution every year... the dropping halo part Nicely done!
    Ken


  • Blueskywonder
    December 28, 2008
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    LOL
    Was it becoming to tight.lol

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