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Craven Crow

Missing image




I know you:
heart, black as coal
perched on brittle branch
waiting for moon



love stuck in craw













Author notes

picture credit: picture credit: luza @ flickr

18 words

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Star Shine
    December 30, 2008

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    The combination of your words and that picture are fantastic. Awesome, instantly emotion-inspiring. Well done.


  • Walk-Free
    December 29, 2008

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    to me, the first line really gave this poem its punch.

    "i know you"

    strong, yet sad.

    thanks and all the best


  • chilali
    December 28, 2008

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    I love the last line. Your take on the picture was fantastic Carol. All the best to you in the contest.

    Love
    Ylova