Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Untitled lovetry

"When you have nothing left but love, then for the first time you become aware that love is enough."

My eyes can say that I am not lying
That to me the one who I desire the most is you
But if it is that moment of my life
That I recognize now…
What it is to be the one in love

Acoustic breeze yawn’s the grazing land in mime
As those pink petals brushes through my skin
As the snow falls faster than those petals of sakura
Why my heart find a reason not be there without you
Until the white foam hides it all, what’s beneath the cold blanket?
It’s your love that stops me from freezing
It’s your love that stops me from being alone
Even in loneliness

For once be in my heart and see
How it is beats... the veins that pumps this warm love
I don’t need any more lies to deceive me from living with out it
Anymore….
For now I will conquer everything with it
As it conquered my soul
Love ..






Author notes

"When you have nothing left but love, then for the first time you become aware that love is enough."

A contest entry for:
Love Still Lingers

A contest entry

what you say?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 2, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    So soft and beautiful. From the first word to the last.

    Best of luck to you.

    Riftkin

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 2, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    I think that this is a very nice poem indeed thanks for sharing good luck in his contest best wishes always be well.


  • Scyphon
    January 2, 2009

    Edit | Reply
    Well done, so beautiful. You took the prompt and ran with it. I love the poem from start to finish, it's really good. Thank you for entering, take care