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Ache To Be Airborne

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having wings trimmed
is a painful affair~

plucked, shaft by shiver,
a quiverful of fine feathers
rattles desperately.

she would fly,
but having been shorn,
cut to quick,
genetically manipulated,
makes for clay-weighed grounding.

her face will tilt,
eyes envy birds,
breath gather goodbyes,
ears alert for passersby’s,
mouth kiss to sky bliss,
skin sensitive as raw nerve,
gut-knowing ache of anchor.

having wings trimmed
is a painful affair!






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  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    sounds pretty painful.lol. very descriptive and vivid imagery here, thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥