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Reunited

As they lay her down
In her final resting place

Down in the frozen bed
Now by her lovers side

The snow began to fall
As if it was a sign

United once again
There was a  single ray of warmth

A gust of wind
sent the snow back into the sky

It could be seen a silhouette
Of two people dancing in the snow

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