She wound a red ribbon into her hair
Hoping to get his attention
A contest entry
- Hues of Red in 12 Lines or Less (there's a catch) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 3, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great. simple. innocently seductive. naive. hopeful. all at once. in the air...
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Short but to the point. I can visualize this quite clearly and I like that it leaves room for the reader to let their mind go and fill in the rest. Good one.
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So short. o.o So attentive. The little things that can be expressed in the absolute thinnest of frames.
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