I sit here, chewing my pen-top
i fall in loss of words....
To express my feelings...anxieties...discomfort...
when I'm sad....upset....i'm hurt...
When people bigger or stronger,
tell me how little and creepy I am...
How I can act wierd at all times
what a useless freak I am....
When I lose the ones I have always adored
and friends abandon me,
How could I relinquish my lonely heart
How can I blindfold my self and not see...
How much I wish, sometimes, from afar,
when I lie on my bead and moan softly,
Some dear angel may come from afar
and with all the happiness of the world, bless me....
I wish, sometimes, I could run away
run away from this harsh world, I see...
When I can break those barriers of suffostication
and be the REAL ME...
Hardly a couple of years back,
I could stretch out my hands and sing in delight...
Am I losing my childhood now,
in this lonely fight???
Author notes
I think, this my first sad poem...life has always been pretty cool for me...just lately some very upsetting things happened to me...i was really depressed. Anyway, im fine now.
Please, be as critical as you like. I'm a growing poet and I ought to be told what is the correct way to write a poem. Please point out the parts you liked/ disliked the most.
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Me likey!
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Awesome
hey lucy..... dis poem ws truly awesome...bt ya... one thng's fr sure... u ain't ths way nemore...
Love ya...[
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Oh Mekhala! I'm sorry to hear this. Sounds to me like you're entering the world of puberty, which is very hard. I'm here if you need to talk. Thanks for sharing this.
Love your Uncle Brian
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Thanks a lot for your support and care. It means a lot to me. Things are a lot better now. I had written this orignally when I was having a little tough time in my boarding school! However, things are better now....I kind of had a liking for this poem, because i have many sentiments attactched to it....Anyway, thanks a lot for your care...
Your niece,
Mekhala
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