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Love Comes Along

Love comes along
once in my lifetime
and ended too soon,
but I have no regret.

Yet again, I still seek
that perfect happiness
and try to make it last
as long as it can.

Love comes along
once more in my time
and each moment with him
is very precious.

For loving him day by day
is worth remembering 
and something to cherish
in my every dream.



summer51

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Love is a precious thing
that needs tender care.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    For me, this reads like a journal entry. It is quite cliche as well.

    I appreciate your sentiment though


    • Summer52
      December 28, 2008
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      Hi, Melissa

      I appreciate your comment and thank you for that.

      Greetings this season for you and your family as well.


      summer51